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Just Checking In - Poem About A Dying Man's Visit with Jesus

July 10, 2015

Just Checking In - Poem About A Dying Man's Visit with Jesus

Just Checking In

This poem, Just Checking In, was just the reminder I needed! I don’t know about you, but sometimes I tend to overcomplicate my relationship with Jesus. I want to pray, but I feel like I need to find exactly the right words. Or to pray about just the right thing. In all this overthinking and overanalyzing, I lose sight of the fact that Jesus just wants us to talk to him. There’s no “right” or “wrong” way to pray.

So, when this poem started circulating on FaceBook, I thought it was a great reminder that Jesus just wants to be our friend! I hope it brightens your day and encourages you to take a minute to sit back and have a chat with Jesus!

Like many inspiring movies and books, this short story may be fictional. However, the impact that this work will have on its readers is very real. Enjoy!


A Minister passing through his church in the middle of the day,
Decided to pause by the altar to see who’d come to pray.
Just then the back door opened and a man came down the aisle,
The minister frowned as he saw the man hadn't shaved in a while.
His shirt was torn and shabby and his coat was worn and frayed,
The man knelt down and bowed his head, then rose and walked away.

In the days that followed at precisely noon, the preacher saw this chap,
Each time he knelt just for a moment, a lunch pail in his lap.
Well, the minister's suspicions grew with robbery a main fear,
He decided to stop and ask the man,”What are you doing here?”

The old man said he was a factory worker and lunch was half an hour
Lunchtime was his prayer time for finding strength and power.
“I stay only a moment because the factory's far away.
As I kneel here talking to the Lord, this is kinda what I say:

I just came by to tell you, Lord, how happy I have been,
Since we found each others friendship and you took away my sin.
Don’t know much of how to pray, but I think about you everyday.
So, Jesus, this is Ben, just checking in today.”

The minister feeling foolish, told Ben that it was fine.
He told the man that he was welcome to pray there anytime.
“It's time to go, and thanks,” Ben said, as he hurried to the door.
Then the minister knelt there at the altar, which he'd never done before.

His cold heart melted, warmed with love, as he met with Jesus there.
As the tears flowed down his cheeks, he repeated old Ben's prayer:

“I just came by to tell you, Lord, how happy I have been,
Since we found each others friendship and you took away my sin.
I don’t know much of how to pray, but I think about you everyday.
So, Jesus, this is me, just checking in today.”

Past noon one day, the minister noticed that old Ben hadn't come.
As more days passed and still no Ben, he began to worry some.
At the factory, he asked about him, learning he was ill.
The hospital staff was worried, but he'd given them a thrill.

The week that Ben was with them, brought changes in the ward.
His smiles and joy contagious - changed people were his reward.
The head nurse couldn't understand why Ben could be so glad,
When no flowers, calls or cards came, not a visitor he had..

The minister stayed by his bed, he voiced the nurse's concern:
No friends had come to show they cared. He had nowhere to turn.
Looking surprised, old Ben spoke up and with a winsome smile;
“The nurse is wrong, she couldn't know, He's been here all the while.

Everyday at noon He comes here, a dear friend of mine, you see,
He sits right down and takes my hand, leans over and says to me:

‘I just came by to tell you, Ben, how happy I have been,
Since we found this friendship, and I took away your sin.
I think about you always, and I love to hear you pray,
And so Ben, this is Jesus, just checking in today.’


When we accept Christ, we are not promised a life without challenges and obstacles. We still experience the ups and downs that this life has to offer. But what we are promised is that we’ll never be alone. We gain the true definition of a best friend in Jesus! He is there for us everyday. We don’t have to pick up a phone or hop in the car...he will meet us wherever we are! Isn’t that awesome?

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